Arranged by: - Chico Daiman Laika
- Fajar Aji Suseno
ELECTRICAL ENGGINEERING MAJOR
FACTUALY OF ENGINEERING MUHAMMADIYAH TANGERANG
Writer : Chico Daiman Laika ( 2220201048 )
Editor : Fajar Aji Suseno ( 2220201052 )
Reviewer: Ahmad Nur Wakhid ( 2220201022 )
M. Abdillah Nurfattah ( 2220201017 )
List of activities in ESP for Electrical Engineering
1. Short Article about Electrical Engineering
2. 5W1H Questions
3. Verbal and Nominal Sentences
4. Tenses and It’s Pattern
5. Active and Passive Construction
6. List of Vocabulary
7. Translation into Indonesia
8. Reasons Why Writer Uses Tenses
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Understanding Control Systems, Types and Examples
The control system is a tool to control, govern, and regulate the state of a system. The term control can be practiced manually to control a control system.
Reported from the book Basic Control System (2016) by FX Setyawan, a control system or control system is a system that produces a certain value as its output through controlling or changing the provisions of the system input.
The control system can be interpreted as a system that controls or regulates a situation to be able to produce the desired output.
An example of a control system that we can find is air conditioning (AC). With the AC, we can control the temperature of the room.
A simple diagram of the control system is as follows: Input (input) → Controller → Process (Plant) → Output
Based on the control system, the control system is divided into open loop control system and closed loop control system.
Open loop control system (open loop)
Adapted from the Control System Book (2021) by Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana, an open loop control system is a control system in which the output has no effect on the input quantity, so that the controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable.
An example of this system is a washing machine. The washing machine will continue to grind and dry clothes as ordered (unchanged). But the output of the washing machine (cleanliness of clothes) will not affect the system.
This system is designed to be simpler and cheaper so that the possibility of error is greater. Other examples of these systems are fans, televisions, and traffic lights.
5W1H Questions
Instruction: Referring to the article you have, please build each two examples of your sentences Question and Answer based on 5W1H (Who, What, Where, Why, When, How).
CLUES FOR BUILDING SENTENCES |
WH | Meaning | Example |
Who | Person | Who is your favorite idol in electrical Business? |
What | Things, Ideas, Information, Action | What are you bringing in bag? (Thing) What are you thinking about electrical Business? (Idea) What kind of electrical Book do you wish to buy? (Info) What are you doing with electrical Business? (Action) |
Where | Place | Where is my book entitled Guide to Electrical Book? |
Why | Reason | Why did you bring that electrical book? |
When | Time | When is his son’s birthday? |
Which | Choice | Which design style of academic book do you like more? |
Whose | Possession | Whose book on the table? |
How | Manner | How did you convince customer about electrical business? How do you choose a book cover? How do you make an attractive electrical book cover? |
How many | Quantity | How many electrical books does she have? |
How much | Quantity | How many electrical book do you need? |
How often | Frequency | How often do you read electrical books? |
How far | Distance | How far is it from your house to the campus? |
How old | Age | How old are you? How long Duration How long will the test be? |
SENTENCE BUILDING
No | WH | Sentence Building (Question and Answer) |
1 | What | What's the function system control |
Answer | The function system control is to controls or regulates a situation to be able to produce the desired output.
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2 | Who | Who is the author of the control system book (2021)
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Answer | The author of the control system book (2021) is Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana |
3 | Why | Why control system it's important
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Answer | Control system it's important because it can make and help a job become lighter |
4 | When | When is the book about artificial control system made by zikri noer and indri Dayana published?
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Answer | The book about artificial control system made by zikri noer and indri Dayana published in 2021 |
5 | Where | Where can we find system control? |
Answer | we can find it on family tools for example : ac, tv, fan, and traffic lights |
6 | How | How does the control system work? |
Answer | A simple diagram of the control system is as follows: Input (input) → Controller → Process (Plant) → Output
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7 | What | What is control system? |
Answer | Control system is a tool to control, govern, and regulate the state of a system. |
8 | What | What is control system according from the book Basic Control System (2016) by FX Setyawan? |
Answer | Control system according from the book Basic Control System (2016) by FX Setyawan is a system that produces a certain value as its output through controlling or changing the provisions of the system input. |
9 | How | How much is control system divided? |
Answer | Control system is divided into open loop control system and closed loop control system.
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10 | What | What is open loop control system adapted from the Control System Book (2021) by Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana |
Answer | Open loop control system adapted from the Control System Book (2021) by Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana is a control system in which the output has no effect on the input quantity, so that the controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable.
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Verbal and Nominal Sentences
Clues: Verbal sentences (V) are those, which start with a verb. Non-verbal sentences start with a noun or pronoun, or with derivative nouns. Verbal sentences consist of a verb + subject + object or adverbial phrase. The subject and object can be either nouns or pronouns. Nominal sentence (N) also known as equational sentence is a linguistic term that refers to a nonverbal sentence (i.e. a sentence without a finite verb). As a nominal sentence does not have a verbal predicate, it may contain a nominal predicate, an adjectival predicate, in Semitic languages also an adverbial predicate or even a prepositional predicate.
Verbal Sentences
No | Sentences | V |
01 | The term control can be practiced manually to control a control system.
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02 | The control system can be interpreted as a system that controls or regulates a situation to be able to produce the desired output.
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03 | Reported from the book Basic Control System | V |
04 | Through controlling or changing the provisions of the system input. | V |
05 | Adapted from the Control System Book | V |
06 | So that the controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable.
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07 | The control system is divided into open loop control system | V |
08 | Regulates a situation to be able to produce the desired output.
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09 | This system is designed | V |
10 | so that the controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable.
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Nominal Sentences
No | Sentences | N |
01 | The control system is a tool to control | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
02 | control system is a system that produces a certain value | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
03 | control system is a control system in which the output has no effect | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
04 | The control system can be interpreted as a system | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
05 | open loop control system is a control | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
06 | An example of this system is a washing machine | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
07 | This system is designed to be simpler and cheaper | NOMINAL SENTENCES |
08 | A simple diagram of the control system is as follows: Input (input) → Controller → Process (Plant) → Output
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10 | But the output of the washing machine (cleanliness of clothes) will not affect the system.
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Active and Passive Construction
Clues: Active sentence is a sentence where the subject performs the action of the verb. For example: John kicked the ball. ("John" is the subject. "John" is performing the action of the verb "kick." Therefore, this is an active sentence.) An active sentence is the opposite of a passive sentence. In a passive sentence, the action of the main verb is done to the subject. The passive voice occurs when the person or thing that performs an action is not the grammatical subject of the sentence. Instead, the person or thing that receives the action is placed before the verb. Passive sentences are formed using the verb to be combined with a past participle.
No | Sentences | Active | Passive |
01 | The control system is a tool to control, govern, and regulate the state of a system | A |
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| The state of the system is controlled, governed, and regulated by the control system tool |
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02 | The possibility of error is designing to be simpler and cheaper from this system | A |
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| This system is designed to be simpler and cheaper so that the possibility of error is greater
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03 | The washing machine will continue to grind and dry clothes as ordered (unchanged) | A |
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| A clothes will be continue grinded and dried as ordered (unchanged) by washing machine |
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04 | Manually to control a control system.
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| Control system is controlled by manually |
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05 | Basic Control System (2016) is report from the book by FX Setyawan | A |
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| Reported from the book Basic Control System (2016) by FX Setyawan |
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06 | Control System Book (2021) is adapted from book by Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana | A |
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| Adapted from the Control System Book (2021) by Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana |
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07 | Open loop control system and close loop control system is divide into by control system | A |
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| The control system is divided into open loop control system and closed loop control system.
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08 | open loop control system is a control system in which the output has no effect on the input quantity | A |
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| Which the output has no effect on input quantity is controlled by open loop control system |
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09 | Price or variable cannot be compared with the desire by variable control | A |
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| The controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable.
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10 | A simple diagram of the control system is follows: Input (input) → Controller → Process (Plant) → Output
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| Input (input) > controller> process (plant)> output is followed by a simple diagram of the control system |
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List of Vocabulary
No | Vocabulary | Pronoun Spelling | Meaning |
01 | Control | kənˈtrōl | Kontrol |
02 | System | ˈsistəm | Sistem |
03 | Tool | to͞ol | Alat |
04 | Book | bo͝ok | Buku |
05 | Basic | ˈbāsik | Dasar |
06 | Find | fīnd | Temukan |
07 | Example | iɡˈzampəl | Contoh |
08 | Machine | məˈSHēn | Mesin |
09 | Produce | prəˈd(y)o͞os | Menghasilkan |
10 | Simple | ˈsimpəl | Sederhana |
Tenses and It’s Pattern
Please identify the tenses of ten sentences you take from the article. Learn the matrix clues below.

1. | The control system (S) is (to be) a tool to control, govern, and regulate the state of a system (O) | Simple present tense |
2. | The term control (S) can be (to be) practiced (V2) manually to control a control system (O)
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3. | a control system or control system (S) is (to be) a system that produces a certain value as its output through controlling or changing the provisions of the system input (O)
| Simple present tense |
4. | The control system (S) can be (to be) interpreted (V2) as a system that controls or regulates a situation to be able to produce the desired output (O)
| Simple past tense |
5. | the control system (S) is (to be) divided (V2) into open loop control system and closed loop control system (O)
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6. | This system (S) is ( to be) designed (V2) to be simpler and cheaper so that the possibility of error is greater (O) | Simple past tense |
7. | open loop control system (S) is (to be) a control system in which the output has no effect on the input quantity, so that the controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable (O) | Simple present tense |
8. | The washing machine (S) will (to be) continue to grind and dry clothes as ordered (unchanged) | Simple future tense |
9. | An example of this system (S) is (to be) a washing machine (O) | Simple present tense |
10. | Other examples of these systems (S) are (to be) fans, televisions, and traffic lights (O) | Simple present tense |
Please sum-up the article by explaining the reason why author use the tenses.
So after we read and also looked for the sentence patterns that make up the article above, we were able to find a lots of simple present tense and simple past sentences, so we can draw the conclusions that the author want to tell about control systems, the use of control systems, and examples of control systems in the present.
Translation into Indonesia
Please translate the article into Indonesia
Pengertian Sistem Kendali, Jenis dan Contohnya
Sistem kendali merupakan alat untuk mengendalikan, memerintah, dan mengatur keadaan dari suatu sistem. Istilah kendali dapat dipraktekan secara manual untuk mengendalikan sistem kontrol.
Dilansir dari buku Dasar Sistem Kendali (2016) oleh FX Setyawan, sistem kendali atau sistem kontrol adalah suatu sistem yang menghasilkan nilai tertentu sebagai keluarannya melalui pengendalian ataupun pengubahan ketentuan dari masukan sistem.
Sistem kontrol dapat diartikan sebagai sistem yang mengendalikan atau mengatur suatu keadaan untuk bisa menghasilkan keluaran yang diinginkan.
Contoh sistem kontrol yang dapat kita jumpai adalah pendingin ruangan (AC). Dengan adanya AC, suhu ruangan dapat kita kendalikan.
Diagram sederhana sistem kontrol adalah sebagai berikut: Masukan (input) → Controller → Proses (Plant) → Output
Berdasarkan sistem pengendalinya, sistem kontrol terbagi menjadi open loop control system dan closed loop control system.
Open loop control system (lup terbuka)
Disadur dari Buku Sistem Kontrol (2021) oleh Zikri Noer dan Indri Dayana, open loop control system adalah sistem kontrol di mana keluaran tidak memberikan efek terhadap besaran masukan, sehingga variabel yang dikontrol tidak dapat dibandingkan dengan harga atau variabel yang diinginkan.
Contoh dari sistem ini adalah mesin cuci. Mesin cuci akan terus bekerja menggiling dan mengeringkan pakaian sesuai perintah (tidak berubah). Namun keluaran dari mesin cuci (tingkat kebersihan pakaian) tidak akan mempengaruhi sistem.
Sistem ini didesain lebih sederhana dan murah sehingga kemungkinan error lebih besar. Contoh lain sistem ini adalah kipas angin, televisi, dan lampu lalu lintas.
EDITORIAL SKILL IN ENGLISH
PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING
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GOOD LUCK.. BE YOUR BEST. |
Name | Function (See: Team Working) |
Chico Daiman Laika | Writer 1 |
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Fajar Aji Suseno | Editor 1 |
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Title of Manuscript | Understanding Control System, Types and Examples |
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Name | chico daiman laika |
Study Program | Electrical Engineering |
Lecturer | Dr. Zalzulifa, M.Pd |
No | Questioners | Much (M); Enough (E); Less (L) | Reasons |
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1 | How far do you know about the concept of the Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) approach in language teaching | √ |
| | The application of Problem-Based Learning in Physical Therapy courses begins by raising real cases that students face when implementing them. After selecting one case, then a theoretical study of the case was carried out both from textbooks and from the results of a study of similar cases. The internet can be a means which is very helpful. Cases that have been completed with theoretical studies are then presented for criticism in terms of the accuracy of diagnosis, effectiveness of therapy, and continuation of rehabilitation. required readiness of all discussion participants to listen, reflect and express logically and systematically. |
2 | Do you think that the Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) approach applicable used to teach English for Specific Purposes (ESP) | √ |
| | Yes of course, in addition to course content, PBL can promote the development of critical thinking skills, problem-solving abilities, and communication skills. It can also provide opportunities for working in groups, finding and evaluating research materials, and lifelong learning. |
3 | How far does Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) influence your English Reading skill in Electro Engineering Business | | √ | | Pretty good, but I'm still a little difficult to understand how many words and accent pronunciation. |
4 | How far does Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) influence your English Writing skill in Electro Engineering Business | | √ | | Maybe the influence is quite big because in today's modern era computers allow large amounts of information and of course can facilitate trends as a means of learning. It can also provide instant feedback to learners to improve their writing skills. |
5 | How far does Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) influence your English Listening skill in Electro Engineering Business | | √ | | Quite helpful because there are so many factors that affect us besides studying Publippreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL). such as motivation, attitude, age, intelligence, talent, cognitive style, and personality are considered factors that greatly influence a person in the process of mastering his second language. |
6 | How far does Publipreneur-Based Language Learning (PBLL) influence your English Speaking skill in Electro Engineering Business | | √ | | Very lacking, because I often stammer when speaking english. |
Understanding Control Systems, Types and Examples
The control system is a tool to control, govern, and regulate the state of a system. The term control can be practiced manually to control a control system.
Reported from the book Basic Control System (2016) by FX Setyawan, a control system or control system is a system that produces a certain value as its output through controlling or changing the provisions of the system input.


The control system can be interpreted as a system that controls or regulates a situation to be able to produce the desired output.
An example of a control system that we can find is air conditioning (AC). With the AC, we can control the temperature of the room.

A simple diagram of the control system is as follows: Input (input) → Controller → Process (Plant) → Output
Based on the control system, the control system is divided into open loop control system and closed loop control system.
Open loop control system (open loop)
Adapted from the Control System Book (2021) by Zikri Noer and Indri Dayana, an open loop control system is a control system in which the output has no effect on the input quantity, so that the controlled variable cannot be compared with the desired price or variable.
An example of this system is a washing machine. The washing machine will continue to grind and dry clothes as ordered (unchanged). But the output of the washing machine (cleanliness of clothes) will not affect the system.
This system is designed to be simpler and cheaper so that the possibility of error is greater. Other examples of these systems are fans, televisions, and traffic lights. 
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